by Abigail Reynolds, guest blogger and author of Mr. Fitzwilliam Darcy: The Last Man in the World
Darcy and Elizabeth are wonderful characters for variations because Jane Austen leaves so much unsaid and unexplored about them. Depending on which passages you choose, you can form very different impressions of them. Part of the fun of writing variations is finding new aspects of their characters to explore in each book. Each Darcy and Elizabeth in my books is different.
Does this make the dynamics of their relationship different? My answer would be yes and no. There are certain basics about the Darcy/Elizabeth pairing that can’t be altered without destroying the basic dynamic, the one that makes them so magnetically drawn to each other. For example, Darcy avoids talking about his feelings and assumes Elizabeth knows more about them than she does. Elizabeth is lively and loves to tease, but because she does that with everyone, it is difficult for Darcy to guess what she means by it. And, of course, there is the profound sexual attraction – Darcy is fascinated by Elizabeth’s intelligence and wit, but that doesn’t stop him from meditating on her light and pleasing figure.
But within that dynamic, there are details that can change depending on which features I highlight. In Mr. Fitzwilliam Darcy: The Last Man in the World, Darcy’s lack of ability to read social signals, especially from Elizabeth, plays a prominent role. In most of my other books, Darcy is driven to pursue Elizabeth, but in this one, he withdraws. That means Elizabeth has to take more risks.
Elizabeth is complex, drawing on some passages in Pride & Prejudice often overlooked by readers. Jane Austen focuses her attention on Elizabeth’s lively spirits, but she makes it clear that her normally cheerful heroine also passes through periods of low spirits. During her weeks at Hunsford following Darcy’s proposal, Elizabeth ruminates at length on both her own failures and those of her family:
In her own past behaviour, there was a constant source of vexation and regret; and in the unhappy defects of her family a subject of yet heavier chagrin. They were hopeless of remedy….When to these recollections was added the development of Wickham's character, it may be easily believed that the happy spirits which had seldom been depressed before, were now so much affected as to make it almost impossible for her to appear tolerably cheerful.
After she returns to Longbourn after Lydia’s elopement, she mourns the loss of Darcy in a way that again depresses her spirits and keeps her awake at night:
The present unhappy state of the family, rendered any other excuse for the lowness of her spirits unnecessary; nothing, therefore, could be fairly conjectured from that, though Elizabeth, who was by this time tolerably well acquainted with her own feelings, was perfectly aware that, had she known nothing of Darcy, she could have borne the dread of Lydia's infamy somewhat better. It would have spared her, she thought, one sleepless night out of two.
© Both Excerpts: Abigail Reynolds, Sourcebooks Landmark, 2010
So in this book, I wrote Elizabeth with a wider range of emotions than I’ve written in my other variations where I focus more on Elizabeth’s impertinence and her tendency to speak a little too much of her mind, but in this book, I worked from Austen’s original description of her reaction to Bingley and Darcy’s minor argument during her stay at Netherfield. At first Elizabeth participates in the fray, but once she perceives Darcy to be somewhat offended, she checks her laughter out of concern for him, even though she doesn’t like him. She is impertinent, but she also modifies her behavior out of a desire not to cause pain. Thus my Elizabeth, when forced to marry the man she still despises, holds her tongue when possible to avoid conflict with Darcy, who she still perceives as ill-tempered and prone to holding grudges.
Writing a quieter, more careful Elizabeth was a challenge for me, but it paid off when the inevitable confrontation between Darcy and Elizabeth takes place, and even more so as they learn to love and trust each other. I think it gives the ending more power and more joy, but then again, I love all my Darcy/Elizabeth pairs. After all, who couldn’t love them?
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About the Author
Abigail Reynolds is a physician and a lifelong Jane Austen enthusiast. She began writing The Pemberley Variations series in 2001, and encouragement from fellow Austen fans convinced her to continue asking “What if…?” She lives with her husband and two teenage children in Madison, Wisconsin. For more information, please visit http://pemberleyvariations.com/